just a bad remake of youtube poop
but it wasn't terrible
just a bad remake of youtube poop
but it wasn't terrible
it's nice
the only thing that i liked is that u had creative ideas the animation is not expert or something like that overall
Animation:7
Music:0(there wasn't any)
sounds: 2(all those voice clips were really annoying it's ok to put them but you need to know when)
Directing: 5
nice job!
maybe...
first let's have a look at the animation well it was ok it seems somehow low quality
the motion were good not bad but the battle was very boring samus shoots and then the other one shoots weeee the story is original though and you should do this but don't make the battles only shooting it's boring
WOW IT HAS COLORS!
anyway let's face it the animation doesn't seem that bad but come on it was so short we have no clue what is this series about and don't know what about other people but i can do this in 10 minuets anyway delete this and upload a fixed one overall:
animation: 0
Music: 0
sounds: 0
Directing: 0
Story: 0
Heart Attack
almost wow that was outstanding
pretty cool yet
the animation can be improved but it was decent it was too short and you cut it in a really bad point but overall:
animation:6
Music:10
sounds:8
directing: 8
thanx for the criticism , it'll help me out
need some improvements
first thing change the song from event to stream
overall:
animation: 4/10 2/5 the animation wasn't really good the quality seemed bad and the motions were bad but still it was a decent animation
music: 6/10 3/5 the music was fine it fit the animation but it was on event and that sucks not good it ruins everything and for the sounds well there wasn't any
some specific tips don't blur backgrounds cause it looks laggy even tough it was an intro you did really told us about anyone just a couple of random battles
but you do have potential
yeah, i know your right, i remade it and now going to upload the new one
pretty sweet!
improvements from second to second nice job!
thankyou
ha nice!
best one ever! i must say of course the 8 is because this video worth an 8 sorry i am a tough judge anyway it's the best one the animation is better of course it can always be improved the text were sort of lame sometimes the text cam out of the box but overall:
animation: 9/10
story: 10/10
directing: 7/10
anyway 8.5 that's my score to you 4/5 8.5/10
I know, everyone tries to be a tough judge.
great improvement
and thanks for putting me in the special thanks but there where stupid problems with this
1. how you controlled v-cam seemed ugly the screen was to stretched
2. the moving background moved with lags and why the heck was it mario world?
3. sometimes sprites didn't had pixels it's probably you traced bitmap not on pixels
4. when mighty and espio were fighting it was the same move like 10 seconds
so you still have some work but you took my tips you took tutorials and you are very good for a beginner
1. i know
2. i couldn't find any other fighting scene at the moment
3. .......... i didn't know that
4. i know!
Thank you!
don't die good advice indeed
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