tal9x9's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Goku Vs Vegeta V1]

is it you're first sprite animation?

cause it kinda looks like that it was SLOW and the motion was bad the battle was boring just blasts blasts kick kick punch punch nothing too special about it
still points for effort

[Luigi's Block]

tooo unoriginal

i like those idea for flashes when someone tries to do something but he fails but here the fails weren't original and when they were they were unfunny
so next time be more original overall nice for a first flash

[Sprite animation 1st go]

good for a first

but first the music wasn't related at all and the bitmap tracing wasn't on pixels so it looked kind of ugly so my tips is too keep training and download v-cam (it's good)
good luck!

[Sonic Sprite Battle]

not attractive

first the v-cam here is terrible
second the quality of the bg is bad very bad and don't blur it
Three it was slow and it had some strong sounds
anyway i don't really enjoyed it

[Sonic Ignition Ep.4 Act1]

almost there

you're very close to bring this to be a fun to pass the time video and fun to watch anyway
this what i have to say:
Animation: was the best from you're other videos still need more action but it much more better then before
music: well the music sometimes felt extremely annoying because it was too repetitive

sound: well there wasn't much so i don't have really what to say about it

over all: 7

and last thing don't do that ring thing to pass the text or you make it no buttons or that we can click the spacebar to proceed because first it was just stupid that the button only appear after 5 seconds i finished reading the text
so i suggest to go back to the old way
and that's it 7/10 3/5

[Shadow's Quest]

alrigh then

since you're a beginner i'll cut some slack (also because you gave me a special thanks!)
i don't think it was bad it was decent the animation is better but still has some works it needs just to be more attractive and fast paced
the real problem is the sound it crashed my ears
and it was too short but over all you're a beginner and you improve from day to day (a lot) so i'll give you 8 for now good luck!

marti031 responds:

yeah i know and thanks!

[Sonic Wars Episode I]

GREAT!

one tip all the stuff until the play menu were annoying because it was way to long in the beginning it was nice but it started to bore me after some time

[gohan vs knuckles]

not good

it was so boring knuckles punches gohan punches knucles punches and that same thing all the video it was so boring even in battle there is a story it seems like gohan and knuckles are punching bugs

[teh lady,old man,&cookie]

it's good but

two tips draw better and now the good tip:
most of the video was still frames there wasn't many animation which ruined the fun

JKSSN responds:

i know that...
I'm too lazy to put inbetween frames. :P
I suck at drawing too...
Oh well. thanks for the review!