tal9x9's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stickman 2 by Celvan]

still needs some work

part of it looks like it was made in pivot and that's no good but i guess it was sort of decent but the 3rd animation was good

[SU: The Mugen tournment]

hmph

please first i don't want to get credit on what i didn't do so get me off of the credits
i don't know how i helped you in this
and i already told you my review in PM so i won't do it now

marti031 responds:

The effects sprites were by you

[Kirby Shakes His Ass]

wow

that's sexy

[Mario vs Yoshi(WTH)]

great job!

it was very enjoyable for it's good sounds good style nicely animated
i gave 8 because it was short and sometimes the battle got a bit repetitive
but overall you made a wonderful job!

[I'm Sonic!]

hey comet

you know why he can't scale and rotate because he is making this with movie maker i don't need to say why using movie maker is bad everyone knows why
so thisis just a waste of time not good please work with flash

[madness revengification]

One of the best i seen today

this is just amazing gibb nice work!

[Alan]

well normally

i will give you points for effort but there was none here
bad story bad animation bad graphics bad sounds no music and bad directing everything here is bad....

[Sonic Shorts: Volume 7]

disappointing

well first it wasn't good that you only made the shorts because some times the shorts weren't funny so not everything was funny and it was way too short
so this isn't really that good

[Shadow's Quest 2]

no cutting slack this time

yup it's time for me to tell you the truth all the truth and not cutting slack this time this animation was OK nothing more then that and nothing less then that it was decent so for the start until then end of the battle the dialog was bad and cheesy quite boring and had no sense after the battle the dialog started to be good
i really like the story as for his originality which is really hard in these days to think on something original
also this is a 100% DBZ sprite movie some people love it some hate it i love it personally but it is DBZ it has DBZ style fighting and DBZ sounds
about the animation the battle was decent for a beginner but still needs some polish and don't use two sprite sheets for one character even if you're missing some sort of sprite it looks weird
the music sometimes felt not related to the scene and you used that matrix sound a lot of times and it became repetitive
so overall i'll tell you this:

some day people WILL talk about you i know it you have amazing potentiality
and great skill you just need to polish you're animation and story and polish everything every day after you pass the level of basics the level of imagination comes that is my level right now when i try to think of nice looking stuff
if you wanna know about the levels here is the list:

Basics: where you are right now

Imagination: where most of the people fail it's a rough place(where i am LOL)

Lazy OFF: where you need to put 100% of you're SKILL in any SECOND of the flash

Fun: it's amazing to get to the level when you can just animate for fun even if it's an hard animation this level is good if you get to it it means making animation in level like DOD or SMBZ will be easy to you and you will have fun making them

so keep on the training and i'll keep on the teaching and thanks for the special thanks again!

marti031 responds:

okay then