tal9x9's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[MechaSonic vs Super Sonic]

pretty cool yet

the animation can be improved but it was decent it was too short and you cut it in a really bad point but overall:

animation:6
Music:10
sounds:8
directing: 8

aduvivier1 responds:

thanx for the criticism , it'll help me out

[Ultimate Heroes Intro 1]

need some improvements

first thing change the song from event to stream
overall:
animation: 4/10 2/5 the animation wasn't really good the quality seemed bad and the motions were bad but still it was a decent animation

music: 6/10 3/5 the music was fine it fit the animation but it was on event and that sucks not good it ruins everything and for the sounds well there wasn't any

some specific tips don't blur backgrounds cause it looks laggy even tough it was an intro you did really told us about anyone just a couple of random battles

but you do have potential

waelalz responds:

yeah, i know your right, i remade it and now going to upload the new one

[naruto tournament fight 2]

pretty sweet!

improvements from second to second nice job!

randomanimator123 responds:

thankyou

[Mario Battle Bros. ep. 4]

ha nice!

best one ever! i must say of course the 8 is because this video worth an 8 sorry i am a tough judge anyway it's the best one the animation is better of course it can always be improved the text were sort of lame sometimes the text cam out of the box but overall:
animation: 9/10
story: 10/10
directing: 7/10

anyway 8.5 that's my score to you 4/5 8.5/10

SuperMarioFan9000 responds:

I know, everyone tries to be a tough judge.

[MTA: The missing saga 2/4]

great improvement

and thanks for putting me in the special thanks but there where stupid problems with this
1. how you controlled v-cam seemed ugly the screen was to stretched
2. the moving background moved with lags and why the heck was it mario world?
3. sometimes sprites didn't had pixels it's probably you traced bitmap not on pixels
4. when mighty and espio were fighting it was the same move like 10 seconds

so you still have some work but you took my tips you took tutorials and you are very good for a beginner

marti031 responds:

1. i know
2. i couldn't find any other fighting scene at the moment
3. .......... i didn't know that
4. i know!

Thank you!

[Tails: UCW Intro]

before i start reviewing

you're preview for this was much more better and got a low score i don't see why anyway about this it was ok i'm glad it's not just text and pictures but still everything seemed so slow and it was quite boring also because of the music but intro is not the important thing the real thing is the important thing

Blank-Mage responds:

*Your
*Much better
*COMMAS
*That's right, I just reviewed YOUR review! How's it TASTE?!

ANYWAY! I assume my Ep 0.5 got a low score because I forgot to mention how to, you know, hit play. Impatient people are impatient. Regardless, I remain undeterred, and this mallet fight I'm making is totally awesome.

About this one, I apologize for the slow presentation, but it IS a direct recreation of the original visual novel opening, so I take no responsibility for my own shortcomings. NONE! I've improved quite a bit over the last, ah, two years. Look forward to not having to deal with this kind of pace again.

[Sonic VeloX Super Batalha]

hmmm

when i watch those things it makes me feel good about my animations well what was good: Nothing
what was bad:
sound quality
animation
writing
voice
story
sprites
originality

try harder if you keep doing this in the end you'll win the turd of the week

Taigo responds:

Eu vou tentar melhorar mais!
Vou também por as legendas em inglês, ta bom? ^^

[Nazo Test]

you need

to change to song from event to stream cause it keeps playing

waelalz responds:

Yeah, i forgot, actually i want to make a stop sound event

[MTA: the missing saga 1/4]

even though you're my friend

i have to tell you the truth first you do have a great potential i can't say a lot just take more lessons and train and you'll improve with time for you're first flash it was very good one advice is upgrade the text cause they look ugly on screen

marti031 responds:

ok, i'll take that into some consideration!

[Mario vs Mecha Sonic SMF]

great!

i could be an asshole and say "IT'S SMBZ" but instead i'll say it's a decent animation actually even more and i don't see why you got this low score at least 2.70

SuperMarioFan9000 responds:

Yeah, must be DBZ sounds. Many people still despise DBZ