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[Tytrun: T1000YVoid]

Animation-

It was decent, you're improving, but you need to find yourself a good style, try not making it look like DBZ, unless of course that's what you like, yet i'm warning you, people HATE that.
the effects were perfectly instruct, not too overused and in good quality.
You made tytrun looking pretty good, and he reminds a little of sonic but like his light side.
you should put the text in boxes and make them pass slower.
the skewing here was terrible, i'm sorry but it wasn't made good, but it's ok, it's the first time you tried it.

3/5

Music-

music was very good, and it matched the atmosphere.
sounds were too loud and overused, you should let our eras rest from time to time.

4/5

Story-

yeah this is where i can see you were tired and just wanted to upload the damn video.
tytrun and mighty fight for no reason then they meet someone bad they team up.
not so good, and don't you dare calling this an episode!
put some more thought to the text and story that could be very good!

1/5

Directing-

great.
v-cam was a bit stiff but it's ok.
just how everything moved so smoothly and matched the music, it was just good!

3.5/5

overall: 2.8

it's a bad animation...not.

it's a bad starting to a series, if you got read of the story, this would've get a high score.

as for animation it was good.

marti031 responds:

Thanks man, i'll keep that in mind

[moustache sprite battle!]

to the spritas

please...that is where it belongs

Eggclowns responds:

but they won't fucking let me to put links!!!

[goku and vegeta vs broly]

almost awesome

it was pretty good but....

the battle was a little slow paced at some times and that really bugged me cause it didn't felt like it was going smooth, but i guess it's just that style of DBZ.
the voice was annoying and really not Appropriate to this animation.
overall that dbz style of fighting is annoying for some people but some people like it.
and you should get rid of the voices.
nice animation.

SXR123 responds:

A.) This is a scene in a movie, it's going to be slow paced unlike your regular random fight for no damn reason flash where something HAS to be happening. in all there were only two slow parts, the rest of it was all action.

B.) The voices fit fine and are pretty damn close to the originals, I made sure of that. Scowering youtube for voice actors who would fit the characters in this film

C.) I did more then just DBZ fight style, in other words I didn't have them constantly shooting beams and using the overused sound effects.

D.) I won't be getting rid of ANY of the voices due to the fact that this is a VOICE acting movie, with subtitles for those who can't hear.

why else would I be using voice actors? for kicks? not a lot of people like to read, I sure as hell don't like to read for a whole 40 or so minutes

next time you watch a flash, read the description, BEFORE you review. This is a scene of a very long sprite movie.

[DaveyToons 09282011]

what can i say?

bad animation no music or sounds, bad story,but directing bad everything
try harder

David responds:

Are you deaf perchance?

[SU: The Mugen tournment]

hmph

please first i don't want to get credit on what i didn't do so get me off of the credits
i don't know how i helped you in this
and i already told you my review in PM so i won't do it now

marti031 responds:

The effects sprites were by you

[Shadow's Quest 2]

no cutting slack this time

yup it's time for me to tell you the truth all the truth and not cutting slack this time this animation was OK nothing more then that and nothing less then that it was decent so for the start until then end of the battle the dialog was bad and cheesy quite boring and had no sense after the battle the dialog started to be good
i really like the story as for his originality which is really hard in these days to think on something original
also this is a 100% DBZ sprite movie some people love it some hate it i love it personally but it is DBZ it has DBZ style fighting and DBZ sounds
about the animation the battle was decent for a beginner but still needs some polish and don't use two sprite sheets for one character even if you're missing some sort of sprite it looks weird
the music sometimes felt not related to the scene and you used that matrix sound a lot of times and it became repetitive
so overall i'll tell you this:

some day people WILL talk about you i know it you have amazing potentiality
and great skill you just need to polish you're animation and story and polish everything every day after you pass the level of basics the level of imagination comes that is my level right now when i try to think of nice looking stuff
if you wanna know about the levels here is the list:

Basics: where you are right now

Imagination: where most of the people fail it's a rough place(where i am LOL)

Lazy OFF: where you need to put 100% of you're SKILL in any SECOND of the flash

Fun: it's amazing to get to the level when you can just animate for fun even if it's an hard animation this level is good if you get to it it means making animation in level like DOD or SMBZ will be easy to you and you will have fun making them

so keep on the training and i'll keep on the teaching and thanks for the special thanks again!

marti031 responds:

okay then

[Shadow's Quest]

alrigh then

since you're a beginner i'll cut some slack (also because you gave me a special thanks!)
i don't think it was bad it was decent the animation is better but still has some works it needs just to be more attractive and fast paced
the real problem is the sound it crashed my ears
and it was too short but over all you're a beginner and you improve from day to day (a lot) so i'll give you 8 for now good luck!

marti031 responds:

yeah i know and thanks!

[teh lady,old man,&cookie]

it's good but

two tips draw better and now the good tip:
most of the video was still frames there wasn't many animation which ruined the fun

JKSSN responds:

i know that...
I'm too lazy to put inbetween frames. :P
I suck at drawing too...
Oh well. thanks for the review!